I m living in boundaries
Boundaries laid not by me but by others
I m folllowing rules made by ppl who dont know me
I m walking on a path which leads to nowhere
I m struck in a deep well wid no hope of light
I hav been crippled by the norms dat i have to follow
I m following the asile leading to death
Also the sun and the moon has turned black
I m not able to see anything ahead
Atrocity has creeped onto me
I dont know where i m headed
I m jus goin on and on like a puppet
I m a captive of my own being
And no mahatma can lead me to freedom...
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5 comments:
tincy...
do u write all these depressing blogs intentionally?
it seems u r in a jail like a convict held for no reason..
Its all in the mind... ur mind can be free even if u r barred with chains.. c'mon gal.. enjoy life.. write something that makes u happy..
hehehehe.....beta its the era of revolutions.....rebell...fight.....win.. and party....who has the time to sulk....u'll get wat u'll think...think of love and happiness and it'l kiss your feet....
as for the poem...its really good....only on the creative side...
for u..i just wish all the bright warm sunny days......fulll of love and clear sky to fly!!:)
mmmuaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
saala.....jaanu. kutta kamina....hamesha rone dhone wali hi poem likhta hai. meri poem sun. hindi mein hai...aur rone dhone wali nahin hai.
mein aaya
bahar leke
paan leke
dukan leke
chal nahin raha mera kaam
ho jayega kaam tamaam
khata hoon mein ki haram
eehehehe..hasta hoon jaise nahin hai koi kaam
fir bhi hoon khush
chutiya lagta hoon
pagal hoon
dheela hoon
magar mast hoon
gf se pyaar karta hoon
gf thodi sarki hui hai
thodi nahin bahut sarki hui hai
sarakna uska kaam
ho jayega kaam tamaam
khata hoon mein ki haram.
waah waah vishal !! tum dono koi kavi sammelan kyun nahi karte! i wud organise one promise
hmm......magar plz ye ensure kar lena ki sunne wali junta jute pehenke naa aane paye andar. aur agar aa bhi gayi hai to....atleast apne apne jute stage se uthake le jaye. ehhe!
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